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Jaa, Razak, Vampire

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Posted: Jan 1 2009, 03:45 PM

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Member No.: 93
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Marital Status: Single
Occupation: Vagabond

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CHARACTER APPLICATION FORM

Character Name: Razak Jaa
Gender: Male
Desired Race: Vampire
Age & DOB: 432 in the blood. 23 mortal, Born in 1563 A.D.
Hometown: Palermo, Italy
Education: Self Educated (Extensive Street Knowledge, little books smarts).
Outline your powers/abilities associated with your species briefly for us, please. 200 words or so. Be realistic. Include weaknesses as well.. For the most part, Razak is your generic vampire, however if you ask him he would never agree with it. He goes no more beyond the strength and speed the vampire is usually associated with. Lifting cars now is as easy as breathing. Dashing past guards and unwary humans, as simple as reading a book. Even his senses are right up there with the rest of his vampire brethern, his eyesight, hearing, and smell all amplified as though someone turned up a knob. There is little challange for Razak beyond those he creates for himself. Please list the mythological influences of your character. Angels, Demons, and their God.
Sample RP of your character (No more than 500 words please.)

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What was there to do? No matter how many times he left and returned to Palermo she wasn't there. Its pointless, just let it go like she so easily let you. He finally told himself. Stepping off of the plane he had carefully chartered to bring him to New Orleans at night, Razak relieves himself of his coat.

There was a slight breeze out tonight, and where I human may complain without a coat on Razak kept his silence, as he so often does. His shirt was pressed against his chest and open sleeves danced with the wind as Razak gracefully took one small hop over the Airport fence, wanting to skip the crowds of the Airport itself at all costs. Razak let out a slight snort as the clouds began to cluster, and darken promising rain.

There was real no place for him to go, but he kept walking. And he'd do this until he saw someone he knew, or wanted to. New Orleans saved his life the first time he arrived in America, and having finally given up on his four hundred year search for his eternal love, was trusting that New Orleans would save him again.

As the rain began to fall on his marbled skin, Razak stopped. Dropped his coat on the sidewalk, and raised his arms out to either side of him. Then he let out a small whisper, saturated with sorrow."And you said that you would never leave..."

This post has been edited by Razak Jaa on Jan 14 2009, 08:03 PM

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Jack Swift	Posted: Jan 4 2009, 07:42 PM QUOTE
The Vampire Group: Illuminati Posts: 18 Joined: 6-February 08 Member No.: 3 Reputation: 0 pts Alliance: Anti-Human Marital Status: Single Mythological Source: Mesopotamian Occupation: Vampire Illuminati Status: Offline	Howdy. Unfortunately, vampires on DG can't have special powers aside from the heightened senses and shape-shifting abilities, etc, that are outlined in the Vampires section of the Species Information. Therefore, I can't pass you right now. If you'd like to look over that section and edit your form, feel free. You have a week. Good luck.
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Razak Jaa	Posted: Jan 6 2009, 08:17 PM QUOTE
Newbie Group: Applicant Posts: 3 Joined: 1-January 09 Member No.: 93 Reputation: none Alliance: Neutral Marital Status: Single Occupation: Vagabond Status: Offline	Salutes All fixed up I believe. Just so used to those extra little tid bits vampires are associated with, easy to forget. ^.^ If theres anything else let me know.
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Nikolai Ciriano	Posted: Jan 11 2009, 11:57 PM QUOTE
The Dhampir Group: Illuminati Posts: 183 Joined: 6-February 08 Member No.: 6 Reputation: 0 pts Alliance: Passive Marital Status: Single Mythology Influences: Huehuecoyotl. Mythological Source: Japanese Occupation: Dhampir Illuminati Status: Offline	Hm. Well... this section about 'briefly outlining the powers associated with your species' is one of the most important sections, and you kind of skipped over it. It's important to us because it's a really good indicator of whether or not you've read the information on the site. So I would like for you to please edit your application once more and to provide for me a brief summary of the abilities of DG vampires, in your own words. Thank you and my apologies for the late reply.
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Razak Jaa	Posted: Jan 14 2009, 08:04 PM QUOTE
Newbie Group: Applicant Posts: 3 Joined: 1-January 09 Member No.: 93 Reputation: none Alliance: Neutral Marital Status: Single Occupation: Vagabond Status: Offline	Alright, I believe that should do it, but don't hesitate to let me know if anymore editting should be done.
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